empty room
"i love you"
the words left his mouth and died
with nowhere to echo but
the vault of his mind
posted by CamoBunny at 23:48
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4 comments
Tuesday, May 16, 2006
when we were young, a woman esteemed as wise told us that men were the hunters, and women were the bunnies. some believed her, and hopped away to roll over at the feet of the first hunters they heard tromping by. the rest of us? we can talk here.
4 Comments:
apropos to and inspired by nothing
5/16/2006 11:55:00 PM
with only a slight modification you could make it a haiku
5/17/2006 09:39:00 AM
You know, that says a lot.
5/17/2006 01:26:00 PM
t-- it just popped into my head, and the more i thought about it, the more it said. i liked that. so i published it.
saara-- now that you mention it, i suppose it could. but i'd lose the impact of that first three-syllable line...
5/17/2006 08:17:00 PM
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